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Sunday, September 28, 2014
Thursday, July 10, 2014
Chapter 28a (Special Rewrite Bonus)
This is a new chapter, part of my rewrite. It comes at the end of Gavin's Kansas trip, right after Chapter 28. Thanks for all your support and patience as I revise; I am working hard and will be ready to put out a paper copy for friends and family soon.
Something was
wrong.
Gavin’s eyes popped open, but it wasn’t 8am. Not in Indiana, not in Kansas, not
anywhere. It also wasn’t six thirty,
which was when he’d set the alarm for because Jomo was coming at seven to drive
him to the airport. The time now, according to the green glow of the bedside
clock, was three twenty-seven.
Like really, seriously
wrong.
His heartbeat was all weird. Racing, bum bum bum bum! Slow for a few beats, fast again. Too
much stress. He tried to breathe through his nose, but he couldn’t get enough
air. He tried again. Worse. Like something
was blocking up his nose. Like he was drowning.
Shh. Just
anxiety.
He rolled onto his side, fumbled his hand around
the plaster base of the hotel lamp looking for the switch. There. Things would be better in the light. Now he could see the pinstriped wallpaper, the
untouched second bed between him and the door, the opaque brown curtains, the
seashell painting next to the television.
Breathe.
You weren’t supposed to have to work at breathing, right? Wasn’t it
supposed to just happen naturally?
He switched on the TV—which meant touching the
remote, germiest thing in a hotel room—and flipped through the channels. Baby bats
in a cave. Sewage treatment plant. How to train aggressive dogs. Plastic
surgeon drawing black lines on a lady’s belly and love handles.
A candy factory.
He put the remote down on the bedspread. Vats of doughy white candy. Machines spraying liquid
color, yellow, blue, red. Other machines
pulling long stretchy ropes, chopping them into bright pieces.
Happy little
candies. But
they were zooming backwards, into some far-off dimension, like he was watching
them through binoculars. Everything was through binoculars: the candies, the
television, seashell paintings. Gavin’s bent knees under the brown bedspread. He
blinked a bunch of times, tried to make the room go back to normal, but each
time his eyes opened the colors were more distant, more faded, more fake.
Enough.
He jumped up out of the bed, which was a horrible
idea. It made all the blood in his body
move the wrong direction, like his arms and legs were about to fall off, like
his brain was going to burst.
The room was
too small. And there
wasn’t any air in it. He needed to get
outside, to open the door and let some but air in. But outside was Kansas, all dry and flat and huge and
windy, and the door was the only thing keeping it out. He felt very sure that
if he opened the door even a crack, it would blow right off its hinges and suck
him out onto the prairie and off the edge of the word.
He leaned on the desk next to the television, tried
to get air into his lungs. He couldn’t feel his feet. Or his hands, he was pretty sure. He held them out in front of him. They looked pale and floppy. He touched the left one to his face, checked
to see if he could feel anything. His
face and his hand both felt like rubber. Maybe there was some tingling. His
cheeks wouldn’t move at all.
Heart attack.
This was definitely a heart attack. Or maybe a stroke.
Don’t look it
up. But he
was doing it already. Too easy, the laptop right there charging on the
desk.
Heart attack
symptoms (oh fuck oh fuck)
Elevated pulse.
Tingling in extremities.
Sense of foreboding.
Shortness of breath that does not improve with
rest. (fuck fuck fuck)
Okay, try
resting. He lay down on the bed. Did his shortness of breath improve? He sucked in a long breath through his
nose. Not just one; try ten. He counted
them out, trying to gauge. Were they getting easier? Eight, nine, ten. Still hard. Eleven, twelve, thirteen. Getting
worse.
So he was having a heart attack. Now he needed a
plan. He looked at the clock: three fifty-two. If he called 911, if they came
and got him in an ambulance, maybe a helicopter, airlifted him to the nearest
all-night emergency room which was probably a gazillion miles away, there was
no way he’d be back here by seven. Jomo
and Lee and Paula would find out he was one of those assholes who thought he
was having a heart attack when it turned out just to be a nervous breakdown. Or
maybe gas. Didn’t it always turn out to be gas?
There was no way he was gonna call 911. He would
rather have Jomo find his dead body in the morning.
So that decided the plan: lie down in bed and
prepare to die, if that’s where this night was going to end up. He was about fifty percent sure he wouldn’t
die, but that left fifty percent that he would.
And if he was going to die, he could at least do it with some dignity.
He turned the television off, got back into bed, picked
up his copy of Time Slide from next
to the clock. They would be discussing the ending in class tomorrow
afternoon—if he was alive—and even though he could recite the play forwards and
backwards, it was always good to review beforehand.
He felt a little less dizzy just holding it in his
hands, the embossed paper cover, the rips along its edges. He brought it up to
his face, took a deep breath. It smelled
like a library, like someplace filled with wisdom and peace.
Breathing getting
a little better. Still not great. But if he was dying it would be
getting worse, right?
He opened to the last act of Time Slide and propped it on his knees. It took a while to get his brain settled on
the page, no surprise, always that way trying to read when you were messed up.
He just needed to give his brain time to sort through the wall of words, all
those TMGs and italicized stage directions.
Okay. Thomas McGrew III and IV on the slide. TMG
IV’s growing obsession with the inevitability of death, his rejection of wordly trappings and
pleasures, his father’s increasingly frantic attempts to distract him. The torn-out hair. The bloody scalp. The way
he let the toy train just slide past him, shredding his father’s last hopeful expression
of desperate love.
When did this
play get so fucking sad?
He’d read it a million times, spent hours dissecting
each twist of the allegory, each sparse line like a tiny jewel. Each perfect,
creeping silence. When his students complained about it, when Talbot Kessel
called Liam Stump so depressing,
Gavin had taken it as evidence of their stupidity. They were completely missing the point. You
couldn’t get all wrapped up in the characters and what happened to them.
Stump’s plays weren’t about people;
they were about philosophical concepts.
Maybe it was just the exhaustion, the Kansas
stress, the lonely hotel room, but suddenly Time
Slide was making him want to shoot himself.
Or maybe—his heart caught for a moment at the
thought of it—maybe this was the sense of
foreboding.
That had to be it, because he’d never gotten
depressed from reading Time Slide before,
not even a little, never felt anything but infatuated, elated, love-struck. This
sinking reaction, the cold horror filling his chest, had to be a symptom of his
impending heart attack and subsequent untimely death.
Stop thinking
about it. Lie still
and accept your own death.
He closed the book, held it in front of him, stared
at Liam Stump’s face on the back. It was
comforting and familiar in the way he had hoped the play itself would be. Stern,
high-cheeked, brow crisscrossed with deep wrinkles as though he wore his brain
on the outside of his head. He watched it for a while, held eye contact with
Liam Stump, got kind of hypnotized by him.
The face seemed aloof, arrogant, but the eyes, if you focused just on
them, were sad. They seemed sadder and sadder as Gavin looked at them, until he
was sure Stump had been crying when the photo was taken, that he was crying
even now.
He was
studying to be a botanist.
Gavin tried to time-travel the face back to
college. To fill out the cheeks, smooth the
trademark wrinkles. It was hard, like pretty much impossible. College-student-Liam-Stump.
Doesn’t-know-what-to-do-with-his-life-Liam-Stump. Silly. No such thing.
Liam Stump was always fifty years old, always looked sixty. Was always wiser
than wise, a genius, someone who could size you up no problem, see right
through you into your soul’s darkest, hiddenest caves of shame and weakness and
horror.
Am I falling
asleep?
Yeah, he was. He knew he was, because his eyes were
closed, and then the book fell out of his hands, hit his knees with a whack.
But then he also wasn’t, because he was checking the time every
fifteen minutes, five-thirty, five forty-five, six, and each time he asked
himself, Am I asleep yet? And
answered himself, No, of course not, sleeping
people don’t read clocks.
In between the clock-checks, his mind swirled and
dipped around the room, which had grown to unlimited size, big and dark and
cold as a midnight prairie. The carpeted floor was beginning to crack below
him, and when he looked into the cracks, he could see the blackness underneath,
the infinite blackness, going down and down and down and something horrible was
at the bottom. He tried to make himself
fly, to get his feet off the ground, at least a few inches, higher would be
better. His toe clipped the carpet, opening a giant gash that almost sucked him
down, but he willed himself up out of it, just barely. Next time he might not be strong enough to
escape. And if he was, for how long? The
thought of having to be strong enough to stay above the ground for the rest of
his life was so tiring he almost wanted to give up and sink.
A voice boomed at him.
GAVIN.
It was Liam Stump.
His glowing, bodiless face floated in the air like a cartoon god, furious,
glowering, with sad eyes and wrinkled brow.
DO NOT FALL, Liam Stump
said, angry, severe. DO NOT FALL OFF THE EDGE.
But Gavin was falling, like the words themselves
were blasting him through the carpet, down into the free-fall below, down,
down, to the place where—
Nothing.
There was
nothing.
That’s
when he woke up. Looked at the
ceiling. Yes, he was awake. Right? He’d
never seen the ceiling in a dream.
Sunday, March 9, 2014
Epilogue: Tree Politics
Lights come up on Girl,
in a brown, torn dress, her body equally brown from sun and forest dirt. She is lying on the freshly-sheered surface
of a broad tree stump. It is the remains
of her mentor, Old Laurel. The trees around her are shifting projections of
green, orange and gold. They speak in music, a chorus of voices and chimes that
are solid like earth and light like pollen.
Trees: Soon is the time
when you move.
Girl
(a long, slow groan): No.
Trees: Yes, soon. It’s
almost time.
Girl:
I can’t. I’m too sad.
Trees: You are a
person. You move. Soon.
Girl: I was supposed to become a tree. Like Old
Laurel.
Trees: You will become a
tree.
Girl:
Not now. He was the only one who would teach me. Now he’s dead and I’ll never become a tree.
Trees: No one is dead.
Girl
(rises up on one elbow): Dead. You know what dead is. Not with us anymore. Gone.
Trees: He is not gone.
He is with us.
Girl
(angry, sitting all the way up): No, look. (Pounds her fist on Old Laurel. A
dull knocking sound). Gone. He was the only one who would help me, and now he’s
cut down.
Trees: He’s below
you. Look down.
Girl
(turns her head downward, trying to look through Old Laurel, through the dirt):
I can’t.
Trees: He’s there. He’s deep in the earth.
Girl (reaches to the ground, picks up a handful of sawdust, holds it against her chest): His roots. But they chopped down his body. They took it somewhere.
Trees: There is no body.
Some parts of us stay, but most parts of us go. Either way, they always become
something new. You are something new, too. And you will be something new.
Girl
(sighs, stares into the leaves and branches above her): You don’t understand. You
don’t understand what it’s like to be a person.
Trees: We will be a
person.
Girl:
I mean now.
Trees: Being a person is
like being hurt and thinking the pain is your life.
Girl:
We get attached.
Trees: You aren’t
attached. You move.
Girl:
I don’t know where to go.
Trees: You move.
Girl:
Old Laurel was my teacher. He saved me when I was lost in the woods, and he
showed me how to be a tree.
Trees: You will be a
tree.
Girl:
Not until I’m dead.
Trees: You can feel him.
You can
smell his sap. He is still with you.
Girl: Only if stay here.
Trees: You are mingled
together. You move and breathe him. His
life is in you.
Girl:
I don’t want his life in me. I want him
to have his own life.
Trees: There is no own
life. There is only life. We are all
part of the same thing.
Girl:
I don’t want him to be dead.
Trees: There is no
death. Everything is life. You will
move.
Girl
(a long silence): Okay. In a while.
Trees: You are a person. You move.
Girl:
Just a few more minutes here.
The projections around
her grow faster, brighter, their voices rising into a chorus. Dancers surround the girl on the stump,
jumping and swaying. Their movements form patterns, break up, regroup into new
patterns. The only still thing is Girl,
lying in the middle of the dance. The song is slow, but the music pulsates like
the quick heartbeat of birds.
Tree Song
No one is lost
No one is lost
No one is alone
Even when your trunk has
cracked
Your bark is stripped
Your branches dry and
broken on the ground
You are in the earth
You are in the air
You are life.
You are dirt and air
Water and light
Nothing can destroy you
You are wise, old, safe
You cannot be gone
You grow where you are
You are in everything
You are here.
You are here.
The stage is frantic with movement. The projections beat in time with the music, flash green and orange and red. The dancers whirl in circles around the spot where Girl was. But Girl and the stump are gone. The music changes, grows calm, comforting. The dancers crouch close to the ground. Girl’s voice can be heard as they dance.
Girl
Song
When I was stuck
When I was stuck
Under
a rock so heavy and dark
I
thought I’d never lift it
I
dreamed of green leaves
And
branches stretching up to the light
A
tree grew from under me
Lifted
me from the dirt
Stood
beside me as I stretched up to the sky
Now
I have to be my own tree
Find
my way to the sun alone
It
will be scary
But
I’ll remember the lesson of trees
I am never lost
I am never lost
I
am never alone
I
am in everything
I am here.
I am here.
The music grows louder again,
quickens. The dance is orderly, in rows,
circles, spirals. The order disintegrates, scatters, reforms. Girl and Old
Laurel have joined in, dancing in joyous patterns, wearing the clothing of
trees.
Trees: No one is lost
Girl:
When I was stuck
Trees: No one is alone
Girl:
Under a rock so heavy and dark
Trees: Even when your trunk has cracked
Girl: I thought I’d never lift it
Trees: Your bark is stripped
Girl:
I dreamed of green leaves
Trees: Your branches dry and broken on the ground
Girl:
And branches stretching up to the
light
Trees: You are in the earth
Girl:
A tree grew from under me
Trees: You are in the air
Girl:
Lifted me from the dirt
Trees: You are life.
Girl:
Stood beside me as I stretched up to
the sky
Trees: You are dirt and air
Girl:
Now I have to be my own tree
Trees: Water and light
Girl:
Find my way to the sun alone
Trees: Nothing can destroy you
Girl:
It will be scary
Trees: You are wise, old, safe
Girl:
But I’ll remember the lesson of trees
Trees: You cannot be gone
Girl:
I am never lost
Trees: You grow where you are
Girl:
I am never alone
Trees: You are in everything
Girl:
I am in everything
Trees: You are here.
Girl:
I am here.
The patterns grown higher as the dancers lift each other, throw one another into the air, rise like birds up towards the ceiling. The lights become bright, brighter, until the greens become reds and the reds become orange and the colors become whiteness, and the dancers and stage and audience disappear into an explosion of light.
The patterns grown higher as the dancers lift each other, throw one another into the air, rise like birds up towards the ceiling. The lights become bright, brighter, until the greens become reds and the reds become orange and the colors become whiteness, and the dancers and stage and audience disappear into an explosion of light.
Note
Well, it's over. Again. I will now be starting a rewrite from the beginning. Hopefully that shouldn't take too long, though I do know there's one new chapter I need to write in the middle. When that's done, I'll be putting out a paper copy for friends and family. After that, I'll be working on getting it formally published.
Thanks so much for reading this novel and for all your support. I love you!
Thanks so much for reading this novel and for all your support. I love you!
Friday, February 14, 2014
Chapter 47a
So which
way?
East
would be obvious. East was where all the
stuff was, only a half-day’s drive,
that tangle of Boston and New Jersey and Connecticut, places that ached in the guts
of young academics, the longing, the hope, if
only I could end up someplace like that.
And
of course, New York. Right into the welcoming arms of Rona and Sinder. That would be nice, right? They’d be thrilled to receive him, wouldn’t
they, to let him sleep on their couch. If Sinder wasn’t sleeping on it already.
So happy you finally made it out. We always
knew you would.
Gavin
slowed down at the yellow, made a last-second decision, pulled a quick u-turn.
Some guy in a truck honked at him, yelled out the window.
Not
east, he decided. If he was going to run away, he needed to run away. West. Into the great wild frontier, like so many
pioneers before him, the uncharted prairie, Iowa, South Dakota, definitely Wyoming.
Of
course, the end point of west was California. And his parents, which was like
Rona and Sinder but worse.
He
was doing twenty down Lincoln. He’d
never seen all the edge-of-town fields and business parks creep past so
slowly. A couple old ladies passed him.
The radio played some song from the Eighties, I want you to know, ooh, ooh, want you to know. He started singing along—he wasn’t usually
too into singing, but everything was weird today. Ooh, ooh, where should I go?
Not
south. Kansas was south. So that left
north. Perfect. He had no idea what the fuck was up there.
He
turned around again, more honking (it seemed like he might have almost hit a
guy on a motorcycle), and doubled his pace towards the entrance to 231.
South—Bloomington.
North—Lafayette.
So,
towards Lafayette. Weird. It was like,
maybe fifty miles away, but there was totally no reason to go there. He had to
keep chanting to himself himself, north,
north, just to make sure habit didn’t veer him onto the wrong ramp. Had he
ever even gotten on 231 North before? It
was hard to tell. It looked just like
231 South, fields, a little town with a few houses and a gas station, more
fields.
Finally
he saw a sign that said he could go left towards Chicago or go right, which
didn’t say where it went. He’d been to Chicago a few times (he must have taken
231 North then), so he went right.
By
the time he hit Gary, that pack of factories at the base of Lake Michigan, the
sky was starting to get dark. He drove
into Michigan, on a road that followed the east side of the lake, but you couldn’t
see it from there. He cut over to the west on a barely-paved road through flat
fields of grass, parked his car at a beach parking lot, watched the sunset
through his windshield. The lake had movie-blue water stretching to the horizon,
gentle waves, a lot more oceany than the cold grey-green of the Pacific from
his childhood. He thought about walking
closer, joining the wholesome Michigan families and vacationing couples sitting
on towels in the sand, staring up at the rose and gold of the sky. But he wasn’t ready to get out of the car
yet. As long as he was in the car, he was still driving, still going somewhere.
As
soon as the sky was dark, he was back on the road, north, up the coast of
Michigan, towards—what? He wasn’t
sure what happened up there, exactly. The state came to a little point at the
top, he knew that. And then what?
Canada, he supposed. Would he have to go through customs? Because all he had was one suitcase with a
dirty suit and a few clean t-shirts, definitely no passport. It didn’t
matter. He would keep driving, and
whatever was going to happen, he would let it.
He
drove for hours in deep country darkness, using his high-beams whenever there
weren’t other cars on the road, which was most of the time. It was late, and he
should have been getting sleepy, but there was something pushing him
forward. Maybe it was Kansas. How he was
supposed to be headed back there tomorrow, yet here he was, driving exactly the
opposite way. Far, far, too far to turn
back. Far enough to guarantee that on
Monday at eleven, when his students took their seats for English 130, World Lit
1850-Present, he wouldn’t be there.
There were only two weeks left until summer. And while nothing was certain—especially on
this road surrounded by inky blackness—he felt about ninety percent sure he
wouldn’t be back in Kansas to finish out those two weeks. That he wouldn’t be back ever.
It
was two in the morning when he saw the sign.
Mackinac Bridge Entrance
6 Miles.
His
mind would never have been able to produce this name, but when he saw it, he
recognized it right away: the bridge that extended off the north tip of
Michigan. Into a place that he couldn’t
visualize, somewhere off the edge of his mental map.
That
name, Mackinac Bridge, the image of driving off the tip, it hit him hard.
Suddenly he was desperate for sleep. Okay, yes, good time to get some rest. The bridge would sound a whole lot better in the morning.
He
turned off the road at Mackinaw City, whose sign promised food and gas and
hotels. But the town was almost as dark
as the state road. There were hotels,
dozens of them, small ones with parking spaces in front of the rooms, giant
ones with fancy signs. None of the signs
were lit up, and all the front offices were dark. He circled for a while, past family
restaurants with fish on their signs, empty parking lots, little stores, more
hotels. Everywhere, lights off, blinds
down.
Finally
he found a place with a light inside, Lakefront Palace Motel. They guy at the desk was sleepy and unshaven,
with a puffy vest and a large-size Styrofoam coffee. He squinted at Gavin, rubbed
at his floppy walrus mustache.
“Need
some help?”
“A
room.”
Gavin’s
voice was a dehydrated croak. He hadn’t eaten or drank anything since New
Buffalo, just stopped for gas once, where he peed but forgot to get a snack. Totally
unlike him. Now the smell of cheap
coffee made his stomach growl loud enough for the desk guy to hear it.
“All
full up.” The guy’s voice was creaky,
too. “Sorry buddy, whole town’s full. Vacation
season. A few weeks ago we mighta had
something, but starting May you got to book ahead, maybe a few weeks.”
So that was it. He was going to have to keep driving. Across the Mackinac Bridge, and wherever he ended up after that. He could find a hotel in the morning, or maybe he’d sleep in his car if it ran out of gas before then.
So that was it. He was going to have to keep driving. Across the Mackinac Bridge, and wherever he ended up after that. He could find a hotel in the morning, or maybe he’d sleep in his car if it ran out of gas before then.
“Do
you guys have a vending machine or anything?”
The
guy shook his head.
“Hang
on.” He went into a back part of the
office where Gavin could only half see him, came back with another cup of
coffee and a granola bar in a wrapper.
“Try these.”
By
the time he was back in his car, Gavin had gobbled down the whole granola
bar—chocolate chip dipped in some kind of white coating—and burned his tongue
trying to drink the coffee. He poured a
third of it out onto the concrete parking lot so it wouldn’t spill in his cup
holder.
The
bridge was long and flat, suspended over a still blackness that made him feel
like he was in outer space. He braced
himself for a border crossing at the other side, but there was just a sign
saying Welcome to Michigan’s Upper Peninsula.
Ah, right: Michigan was that weird state that was split in two
parts. He’d just left the bottom part,
and this was the top.
He
kept driving, through a forest now, the road bumpy with rocks that grated under
his tires. He wouldn’t have thought roads could get any darker than the ones he
was on a couple hours ago, but no, this was much, much darker. He crept forward
with the high-beams on, waiting for a deer to jump out in front of him, or
maybe something worse. He only had about
a quarter tank of gas left, and there was no fucking way he was sleeping in the
woods.
He
pulled his phone out of his pocket, checked it—no signal. Kept going, because what else could he
do. But he was starting to entertain the
possibility that he had massively fucked up.
Made one of those dumb, impulsive decisions that he prided himself on
never making, and predictably enough, now he was completely fucked. Lost somewhere on the very edge of America,
nothing to eat, nowhere to sleep, nothing to do but keep driving north and hope
for civilization to emerge somewhere up ahead.
After
a while—hours? No, actually only forty-five minutes—the trees ended. The road was normal again, a regular flat
road with signs lane markers and even a few lights.
And
then a big sign across the entire road.
Canadian Border Crossing
Ten Miles,
it said. Prepare to stop.
He
pulled out his phone again. It was working
now, and there was a text from a few hours ago.
Rona. What did she want?
He
couldn’t read it now—something about Time
Slide, but the road was too dark and scary to take his eyes off it for more
than a second. Anyway, he needed to get his thoughts together for this border
thing. They were going to ask him where he was going, right? What his business was? And what would he say? Should he make
something up, or just tell them the truth: I’m
driving north. Was that an okay reason to enter Canada? And if he needed a passport, would they just tell
him to turn back, or could they arrest you?
He
braced himself, tried to strengthen his insides, quiet the thumping of his
heart.
Off
to the right, he saw lights. Was that
the border? No, a small building,
surrounded by a parking lot, a few cars.
White Pine Diner.
Open 24 hours.
He
blinked a couple times, made sure he had read it right. Yes, definitely. Twenty-four
hours. It was like some kind of insane beautiful dream. He pulled into the lot, stumbled out of the
car on legs that kept bending under him in funny ways. The most amazing smells hit him as he opened
the door: breakfast smells, frying potatoes, steam.
“Eggs
with bacon, juice, coffee. And, um,
pie,” he told the waitress. He wasn’t
even the only customer. There were a few
bearded guys in ski jackets, one really skinny guy in a baseball cap. This was like a straight-up party.
Once
the coffee and toast came out and he’d had a few bites, Gavin remembered the
text message. He set his phone on the
sticky table and turned on the screen.
Just saw time slide. Off
off off broadway. U were right, his best one.
And
then, an afterthought:
Where’s my movie.
“Here’s
your eggs. Pie’ll be warm in a minute.”
The waitress set them down carefully, like she could tell Gavin was fragile. She seemed really young, like one of his
students, with makeup covering bad skin and a huge red-blonde halo of hair
around her face. She gave him a curious look, like it was weird for him to be
here, which of course it totally, totally was.
“You
heading across the border?”
He
nodded.
“What’re
you doing up there?”
Gavin took a sip of his coffee to make sure his voice would work.
“I’m
not sure.” He wondered if it would be
rude to ask what she was doing up here, surrounded by miles and miles of
what seemed like nothing at all. Did she live with her family? What did they do? They weren’t farmers like his Kansas
students, right? Maybe they needed
people to clear the roads, or maybe logging in that forest. Or hunting—was that
a job?
He
looked down at his phone, its screen dark again, but Rona’s text was in his
mind. He took another sip of coffee for bravery, cleared his throat, took one
more sip.
“Actually,
I’m making a movie. Could I maybe, I
mean if you wouldn’t mind, could I ask you a few questions?”
She
raised her orange eyebrows, a little skeptical, but she sat down on the
vinyl-covered seat across from him. A
good sign. “What do you mean, you’re making a movie? You don’t have a camera or anything.” Close up, she looked even younger, maybe high
school. Did they have high schools up here?
How could you have a high school in a place full of just forest and no
buildings? Was she the only student?
“It’s
with my phone,” he said. “Actually, I
don’t know how to make a movie. I’m
trying to learn. That’s weird, right?”
“It’s
not that weird.” She wrinkled her
forehead like she had to think about it. “You have to start somewhere. Yeah, I
could be in it.”
He
looked down at his phone, pressed the camera button. That’s what he would use, the camera,
right? He hardly ever took pictures, and
he’d never made a video. He tapped a
button and a bunch of options popped up, black-and-white,
comic, vignette. He tapped it again
to make them go away.
“Here.” She grabbed the phone, frowned at the screen
for a second, pressed something. Handed
it back to him and pointed at a button at the bottom that hadn’t been there
before. “It’s this one.”
“Okay,
thanks.”
“Wow,
you seriously don’t know how to make
a movie.” He was watching her through the phone screen now, giggling, rolling
her eyes. Definitely in high school. A
friendly, helpful high-school kid; he didn’t remember any of those from his own
high school. He tried to imagine the
snotty kids from Silicon Valley helping some confused old dude who didn’t even
know how to use his own phone.
Maybe
it was different to go to school on the very edge of America. Maybe her friends
were chipmunks, and instead of going to the mall, they had tea parties in a
mossy grove in the woods. Her parents might be the border agents he’d be talking
to in a few hours. Or they could be CIA operatives looking for terrorists. Or Canadian lumberjacks, or Mounties, or, um,
hockey players. Maybe he’d meet them
tomorrow, on the other side.
He
had not idea what would happen tomorrow, where he’d be, who he’d meet. The
options were infinite. All he knew for
sure was that he was traveling north, and anything was possible.
His hands were shaking really bad, but he tried to get the phone steady. Steady was good for filmmaking. With his elbows braced on the table like a tripod, he centered the girl’s freckly face on the screen and pressed record.
His hands were shaking really bad, but he tried to get the phone steady. Steady was good for filmmaking. With his elbows braced on the table like a tripod, he centered the girl’s freckly face on the screen and pressed record.
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